DJ Ahren - Check One, Two

This song is still a work in progress. I am going to have Robert and Sean each do a verse on it. So far I have 1+ verses and the chorus/hook and the beat.

Beat/Melody by DJ Ahren

Video of me performing Check One, Two @ a protest.
*put vid here*

Lyrics

Verse 1
here’s a message to you
about the wreckage of the people
didn’t anyone tell you
that killing is illegal
you might cover your ears
and tell me to shush
but this message is for you
Mr. president bush

*as a president it’s your duty to
preserve, serve and protect us
but how can you sit back while
soldiers break their necks for us
have you experienced the
violence of  being in a war
have you loaded missiles
carried guns till your back is sore
have you even been on a battlefield?
well I haven’t either
ya know why mista GW,
I’m a peace believer*

yeah I’m a peace believer
you’re a deceiver
so when you receive this
stop putting people though this meat cleaver
that you call war
you’ve opened hell’s door
the way you talk about it
it seems like you want more

you’re addicted to this drug
called violence
like a little kid addicted to
his video games
you want to make us sit back
and be silent
but I have a fire inside me
that can never be tamed

I ain’t gonna shut up
I’m gonna speak the truth
the words coming out my mouth
are a message to awake you
just let America know
that you’re a damn fool
resign or the world will be over
before I say 

Chorus
check, 1, 2, check, 1, 2
check one two three four
I open my eyes and
see a world filled with war
when will it end?
or will we get more?
is violence a trend?
is peace a chore?

Verse 2
so we all go to all
these peace protests
and the message we give
might be hard to digest
but while our soldiers go to war
with the bulletproof vests
we are praying at home
and hurting in our chests

*This part will probly not be in the song. If you want to work on the timing and see if you can make it work feel free. Here's the beat and here's my email.